Dot
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was once a women named Dot and she was made fun of because of her name.
Even her parents made fun of her every other day.She was so scared to
go to school that she had to be home schooled.But there was one person
that thought her name was cool and his name was Adam.He was her only
buddy. They always hung out after she was done with school. One day she
wanted to change her name but Adam wouldn’t let her. She hated Adam
after that and they never talked after that.
nice i really liked this one :)
ReplyDeletehey good job only a coulpe of dots,:)
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